Time map response

My concept for the time map piece began with the idea of documenting my thoughts/inspiration during every hour of the day. I chose to express these thoughts in both line and words on 24 strips of paper and then attached each piece together to create a "time loop." I chose to do this to show a progression of my thoughts expressed as lines and thoughts to convey the inspiration I felt throughout the course of one day. My lines start out as groggy and very basic during the early morning hours, and slowly move to more intricate lines containing more detail and attention during later times. Suggestions I received mostly consisted of taking out the words and solely focusing on the lines throughout the day.