Critique 3 reflection

I am satisfied that people were able to grasp the concept of my piece, although in bit. Something I should improve is to increase the volume of my recorded voice during the second and third commercial. In the room, I faintly heard them and I felt that those parts are vital to better understand the concept, especially because the switching of words made the knife be advertised for another use. Overall, details such as the door knocking and the opening of a bag of chips added to the response during critique. For the future, I want to learn how to further distort the commercial audio to have a more eerie/ horror vibe as well as include glitch/ credible static effects.