Critique 2 Reflection

People were very generous with their comments on my 6'X6' video. The resounding opinion stressed the effectiveness of the characters' facial expressions - the exaggerated frowns and eyebrow raises, especially. So I took the acting away as one of the video's strengths. Critique-wise, I was made aware of the unfocused scenes, and it was suggested that I reshoot in order to remedy the blurriness that made transitions jarring. The project as a whole would benefit from some of the same camera-centric refinement. I know the next assignment is strictly audio, but for project 4, I'll be sure to keep in mind that editing runs more smoothly when the material one is working with is already organized and sharp.