Wednesday, February 25, 2015

Critique 2 Reflection

The feedback I received in critique helped me form some alternate options for extending and further editing the project. Some suggestions included putting the food in order from what is known as a "breakfast food" and a "dessert" etc. However, I'm unsure if I will use this tactic due to the fact that I wanted the passage of time to be apparent but not obvious of the order because sometimes you can have breakfast for dinner etc. Some other comments included compliments on the shots and variety of angles that I used in the project as well as taking notice to the absence of the human body until the end of the video. Further more in the future I may use a shot of the sink instead of piling dishes on the stove top for a quicker and clearer reading of the material.

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