Critique

Critique for project one went really well. I was happily surprised by the work that my fellow classmates presented because I didn't know what to expect without knowing the way they work on other projects. There were a lot of strengths in the works but also a lot of room for improvement. I think that my piece was read just how I wanted it to be seen. Even before the first loop was over I heard comments on how the doll was a little prick and a terror to the sewing machine which is exactly what I wanted, so I think it went really well. For project two I hope to see a lot of development in the concepts and meanings behind the works. This critique definitely set the bar high and I hope to see great improvements in everyone's work including my own.