Monday, February 9, 2015

Critique Feedback

During critique people commented on how the angles worked well to show the detail of the food and allude to the attention and care put into cooking. They also mentioned how the video could be interpreted as cooking for yourself and taking pride in solitude. To improve my piece, the audience said that I should have showed longer footage of the table once it was set. I should have also shot two place settings to indicate more than one person being served, even thought they interpreted the title, "Dinner Guest," to indicate serving someone else.

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