Critique Reflection

The feedback I received was mostly about focusing more on when the main character becomes depressed and showing how she changes. After shooting and editing this video, I realized that trying to capture so much information in a short period of time was a lot harder than I imagined it would be. For my next project, I'm going to try doing something less complex. If I had to redo this video, however, I  would go back and change the name of the dog and/or add another snapshot with a new character--the main character's grandfather (if I keep the name "papa").